My Canada includes smoked meat! (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} mindme) wrote in metamal_english, |
Good layout, English. The only things I'd change:
Don't terminate your Skills/Experience list items with a comma.
Replace "till now" with "Present".
For Alta Bank (Russia, Moscow)
Put it in past tense:
Activities: Worked on routine technical issues, hardware purchasing, personnel management, developed a telebanking system for corporate clients
(If you ever hear of a writing job ... consumer/internal documentation, marketing, etc. let me know! I've got a lot of experience as a hardcore tech writer/technical editor, computer game journalist, etc.)
Don't terminate your Skills/Experience list items with a comma.
Replace "till now" with "Present".
For Alta Bank (Russia, Moscow)
Put it in past tense:
Activities: Worked on routine technical issues, hardware purchasing, personnel management, developed a telebanking system for corporate clients
(If you ever hear of a writing job ... consumer/internal documentation, marketing, etc. let me know! I've got a lot of experience as a hardcore tech writer/technical editor, computer game journalist, etc.)
